Writing a characterisation

Writing a characterisation in English basically follows the same rules as in German. Read more here:

 

Writing a characterisation

Writing a characterisation – basics

  • Definition: A characterisation is a description of a person.
  • Objective: To describe the main characteristics or peculiarities of the person, so that the person’s deeds and actions can be understood and comprehended!

Example of a characterisation in English

>> Characterisation of Melinda from the book Speak.*

In the extract ‘Welcome to Merryweather High‘ from the teen novel ‘Speak’ which was written by Laurie Halse Anderson and first published in 1999, the protagonist, Melinda, is introduced when her high school year begins.

Melinda, might be around 14 or 15 years since she visits ninth grade, on this certain day she wears a skirt, which she doesn’t like (l. 2) and has seven new books with her (l.2).

Melinda comes across very organized and as if she is always right on time or early (l. 4), she doesn’t seem to be popular, since nobody sits with her on the bus (ll. 13-14) or even talks to her (ll. 11-12).

Moreover, the reader learns about Melinda, that she is a person, who doesn’t like to be in the centre, which tells that she isn’t popular and gets along on her own pretty well (ll.10-13), but she still cares about what others think about her which is made clear, by the following lines: ‘If I sit in the front, it will make me look like (…)’ (ll. 6-7), this also tells us that she is an overthinker because, she analyses thinks and options before she does something. Other situations also show that she is clever and likes to reflect everything around her and absorbs the information she gets, for example when she has the overview about her ex-friend’s relationship to her, which makes her not look at them (ll. 25). Furthermore, Melinda doesn’t like to go after trends and is more the person to stay at home and do the stuff she likes on her own while not socializing with other people (ll. 19-21) even though she knows that it will make her an outcast, which she then also notices when she is back in school (l. 24). That Melinda is able to say about herself that she is an outcast and in the end once again describes how she doesn’t fit into the class and how she is attackable: ‘(…) a wounded zebra in a National Geographic (…)’ (ll. 28-29) makes the reader believe that she is at least a little bit self-confident and a lot self-reflective.

All in all you can say that Melinda is a very intelligent person, who seems to be very nice but still is pretty shy, which makes it hard for her to find friends and stay in contact with them.  She also might become even more self-confident, very popular and a good leader as soon as somebody helps her to get out of her comfort zone.

 

Die Charakterisierung entstand in der 9. Klasse am Gymnasium und wurde mit 2+ bewertet.

    • Speak – Roman von Laurie Halse Anderson*

    • Speak – Textband mit Annotationen von Cornelsen*

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Writing a characterisation in English – basic formulations 

 

Introduction

  • In the novel / short story / thriller, „….“
  • which was written by ….
  • and first published in ….
  • The protagonist, NAME,  is introduced / described / mentioned / …
  • When his / her ….
  • (NAME) is … years old
  • and is a PROFESSION.
  • He / she wears ….
  • and likes ….

 

 

Main part

  • NAME comes across ….
  • and although he / she is …. (l. 4),
  • he / she doesn’t seem to be …. .
  • since …. (ll. 13-14).
  • Moreover, the reader learns about NAME, that he / she is a person, who …,
  • which tells that he / she is / isn’t …
  • But he / she still ….
  • which is made clear, by the following lines: „xxxx“ (…)’ (ll. 6-7).
  • This also tells us that he / she is …
  • because, he / she ….
  • Other situations also show that he / she is … (ll. 25).
  • Furthermore, NAME does / doesn’t like to … which can be seen in the expression …. (ll. 19-21)
  • even though he / she … .
  • That NAME is able to say / do / go / show / reflect / …..
  • makes the reader believe that he / she is …. .

 

 

Finish

  • All in all, you can say that … is ….,
  • who seems to be ….,
  • which makes it / results in …  

 

 

Linkingwords / Verbindungswörter

Bei den Formulierungen im Rahmen der Charakterisierung kann die Sammlung der Linking Words eine gute Inspiration sein.

Basic formulations for writing a characterisation

 

 

 

 

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